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Kelsey.

My friend came over to use the studio. So while seeing her doing the shoot for her "Delicate" series, I couldn't resist to capture a few.

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This is a unique vantage point. The balance of light and shadow creates dynamic shapes that draw the eye through the piece. The depth of field also contributes to the smoothness created in this composition. I looked at a fair number of times and came to the conclusion that the wisp of hair on the model's chin may be perceived as a disctracting compositional element. Exceptional detail on the lips the contrast in coloration is a positive addition to this feature of the piece. Perhaps a slightly different whit balance could have been used to add a little something to the highlights, but overall all a great piece!
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:iconiamphoenixmoth:
I really like this; the colors, the lighting, the way you only caught part of her face. It's beautiful.

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Me: I would be terrified if someone asked me to make a family tree.
Me: and all the cousins I mean? that's JUST my mother's side.
<annika235>that wouldnt be a tree
<annika235>it's a FOREST
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This peace came out really well. The two hairs just coming up to the lips as if wanting to caress them. Also the placement of the focal point works well with the shoulders softening the background. It creates this analogous sensation that brings all the beauty that can be found in a woman's lips.

Great job indeed.
:icontuishimi:
I went to your flickr page... some gorgeous shots.

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...be quick to listen, slow to speak, slow to anger...
:iconelessar777:
Nice shot! :)

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...on ne voit bien qu'avec le coeur. L'essentiel est invisible pour les yeux...
Portrait Club.
:iconxfallen-x-angelx:
this is absolutely beautiful!

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We make our own happy endings...
:iconsugaroo:
beautiful. the lighting and shadows really work amazingly!

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K BAI :K
:iconbeenblue:
I really like this one...it envokes a sense of desire in me when I look at it, like I want to put my lips on hers. Very beautiful :)

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B.Blue
:iconreuisu:
That's the best chin photography i've seen all night.

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- Broseidon, Lord of the Brocean

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April 30
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Canon
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
1/640 second
F/1.4
50 mm
400
Apr 30, 2009, 4:37:33 PM

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